About

I hold a Ph.D. in history and have long experience as peer reviewer and book reviewer for multiple journals. I also have evaluated manuscripts for multiple workshops, and am currently a reviewer for Kirkus Reviewing Services.

Developmental Editing

I focus on the “big picture” emphasis of developmental editing rather than copy editing or line editing.

My editing services include a read-through, manuscript assessment, and editorial letter (may be in the form of an email) that offers an evaluation of your manuscript’s argument, evidence, structure, and style. In my evaluations, I give special attention to clarity and consistence of argument, and to making sure the structure of your work is coherent and building on itself. I also give attention to style consistent with the audience you as an author are trying to reach.

Testimonial

“Susan Breitzer’s intellectual curiosity makes her a perfect guide for considering your own best words about a project. She listens with uncommon attention and asks keen questions to help a writer know where she has left gaps, where she is making leaps without offering a bridge. My time with her has already been invaluable.” —A.L.